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January 4, 2013
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Orange Parasprite by x-MidnightAura-x Orange Parasprite by x-MidnightAura-x
This is my first attempt at any kind of realism... I don't like it :( I think I will stick with some form of lineart.
I know this isn't original but I did it anyway :3
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First may I say that this is quite a different peice of artwork you have created and i appritiate you posting it, but I believe there are many ways you could fix this using your artistic and creative abilities I know that you have. Firstly, this looks hastily made seeing from the dull backgroung and uneven shapes around the paraspites. I must also note that the wings and eyes look uneven as well. But lets not just focus on what needs to be improved, i can see that your artistic and creative abilities are expressed in many other ways in your art. I can see that you understand the act of perspective from the shading you have used on the paraspites body, wings, eyes, and even the background. You also seem to understand size and expression seen clearly from the paraspites gleam and adorable smile. You have many things to improved but many skills you should embrace. This is quite an amazing peice of artwork and I for one am glad I have favorited it.
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SuperAliBaba Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh! That's cute!
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x-MidnightAura-x Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thanks, but I wont be doing any more in this style.
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